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Svadas' Jedi App

Post by svadas on Wed Jul 12, 2017 2:32 pm

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Username: Svadas

Steam ID: STEAM_0:0:77252358

Steam Profile: http://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561198114770444

Time on server: Few days

Is this a character application, or transfer: Application

What items are you requesting? Jedi Character, with a standard lightsaber with a green lightsaber crystal. Strong knowledge in Force. Either Master or Knight rank, preferably the former.

Roleplay experiences? Lots. Several years all over, including WoW, SWTOR, other Star Wars servers, LOTRO, etc. Also SA of Infineon and New Haven SWRP servers.

Why should you have all this? Best Jedi roleplayer on Gmod. Literally




[Optional]Backstory:

What are your perks/skills?
Confidence, Force Abilities, Lightsaber Prowess, Calm,

What are your faults/flaws?
Lure of the Dark Side, Zealotry, Disrespectful (at times),

What force abilities do you have?
Altus Sopor
Curato Salva
Force Speed
Far Sight
Force Empathy
Force Sense
Telepathy
Force Jump
Telekenesis
Adiabatic Shield
Comprehend Speech
Energy Resistance
Mind Trick
Remain Conscious
Shift Sense
Sound Mimicry
Tapas
Thought Shield
Ionize
Tutaminis
Alter Environment
Art of Movement
Beast Language
Breath Control
Control Pain
Force Body
Force Contort
Force Deflection
Force Stun
Force Stasis
Flamusfracta
Similfuturus
Force Harmony
Pyrokinesus

Character traits:

Covered in strengths and weaknesses tbh. Obviously has more depth than this, but for an app should be enough

(Optional)Character Description:




Passive RP(Optional):

Combat RP(Optional):

Did these in an old app.




Notes:

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Savage on Wed Jul 12, 2017 4:00 pm

svadas wrote:Best Jedi roleplayer on Gmod. Literally
You seem very arrogant.
Even so, You'd start off as a youngling.
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by svadas on Wed Jul 12, 2017 4:04 pm

Savage wrote:
svadas wrote:Best Jedi roleplayer on Gmod. Literally
You seem very arrogant.
Even so, You'd start off as a youngling.

Arrogant is the wrong word. "having or revealing an exaggerated sense of one's own importance or abilities." Nothing is exaggerated.

There is no lore reason for a initiate to be out on this planet. That doesn't even make any lore sense. Especially with the strict conservative Jedi policies.

Either way, I'm applying for upwards because evidently it is needed due to the anarchy.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Midnightspy007 on Wed Jul 12, 2017 4:15 pm

+Support

I've known Svadas for some time now, I can second his "Best Jedi roleplayer on Gmod. Literally" claim. He is an excellent role player, and will be a great addition to the force users on the server. I am also in favor of him starting at a higher rank, seeing as I know he can manage it well.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Toki on Wed Jul 12, 2017 4:42 pm

+Support

I've played a few servers with Svadas and I can attest to his roleplaying skill. He's fantastic in terms of being literate, and I've never known him for abusing powers given to him with applications, or breaking rules on any terms.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Merci on Wed Jul 12, 2017 5:50 pm

What items are you requesting? Jedi Character, with a standard lightsaber with a green lightsaber crystal. Strong knowledge in Force. Either Master or Knight rank, preferably the former.  Alright. Let me tell you. You can't just get a Master or Knight rank of of the bat. It just makes it a little over the top. Don't get me wrong, We need more Jedi's but you don't just suddenly get master.

Why should you have all this? Best Jedi roleplayer on Gmod. Literally I'm sorry, but all i've seen you do is one-liners, and I've seen people who play as Jedi make 2-3 paragraphs PER /ME. You're not the best. Sorry to break it to ya.




[Optional]Backstory: I'll come back to this later.
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What force abilities do you have?
Altus Sopor
Curato Salva
Force Speed
Far Sight
Force Empathy
Force Sense
Telepathy
Force Jump
Telekenesis
Adiabatic Shield
Comprehend Speech
Energy Resistance
Mind Trick
Remain Conscious
Shift Sense
Sound Mimicry
Tapas
Thought Shield
Ionize
Tutaminis
Alter Environment
Art of Movement
Beast Language
Breath Control
Control Pain
Force Body
Force Contort
Force Deflection
Force Stun
Force Stasis
Flamusfracta
Similfuturus
Force Harmony
Pyrokinesus
WAYYYYYY too overpowered, even for a master/Knight.




Passive RP(Optional):

Combat RP(Optional):

Did these in an old app.

^ No. Just. No. It doesn't mater if you made a very different ap with Roleplay or a backstory, you HAVE to do either one or the other on EVERY APP. It's going to get you INSTANTLY DENIED.

Although, I don't fully wish for you to NOT be a jedi. I would want you to be atleast a Padawan. It'll be a little better.
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by svadas on Thu Jul 13, 2017 1:40 am

Alright. Let me tell you. You can't just get a Master or Knight rank of of the bat. It just makes it a little over the top. Don't get me wrong, We need more Jedi's but you don't just suddenly get master. - Lmao

I'm sorry, but all i've seen you do is one-liners, and I've seen people who play as Jedi make 2-3 paragraphs PER /ME. You're not the best. Sorry to break it to ya. - Writing a bunch of useless tripe makes you a bad roleplayer, not a good one. Short, concise, simple. Your Jedi team is also incompetent.

WAYYYYYY too overpowered, even for a master/Knight. - HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

^ No. Just. No. It doesn't mater if you made a very different ap with Roleplay or a backstory, you HAVE to do either one or the other on EVERY APP. It's going to get you INSTANTLY DENIED. - Nice.

Although, I don't fully wish for you to NOT be a jedi. I would want you to be atleast a Padawan. It'll be a little better. - Your Jedi team is an embarrassment and I would find it insulting to be put under any of them.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Slim on Thu Jul 13, 2017 6:24 am

+Support

Everything Svadas says here is true. Yes, even about being the best Jedi roleplayer on Garry's Mod. More than likely because it can be agreed that Garry's Mod is certainly not the greatest platform to expect a high standard of roleplay from; or in other words, Gmod roleplayers are pretty fucking shit all in all. I am confident that Svadas is more qualified than the current Jedi "faction leader" both ICly and OOCly. The abilities he's asking for aren't even overpowered, I take it they just looked too complicated for all of the people worried about it; they are honestly very basic powers, he just used fancy words to describe them.

As for the RP examples/backstory, he has made another app and demonstrated perfectly that he knows how to RP, not even taking into account his in-game examples.

I not only recommend that this app be accepted, even if leaving him as a Jedi Knight, I encourage it, I so far as find it necessary.
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by betamale on Thu Jul 13, 2017 6:26 am

Hey, a humble guy. I like it.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Slim on Thu Jul 13, 2017 7:01 am

betamale wrote:Hey, a humble guy. I like it.

Can't tell if genuine input or sarcasm, cause this isn't one of the situations where it's both.
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Savage on Thu Jul 13, 2017 8:11 am

DENIED
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Slim on Thu Jul 13, 2017 8:18 am

Savage wrote:DENIED

yeah, why?
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by betamale on Thu Jul 13, 2017 4:48 pm

Slim wrote:
betamale wrote:Hey, a humble guy. I like it.

Can't tell if genuine input or sarcasm, cause this isn't one of the situations where it's both.

Considering he claimed he's the best Jedi roleplayer in all of Garry's Mod and insulted all of the current Jedi characters, you tell me if he's being humble.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Slim on Thu Jul 13, 2017 5:38 pm

betamale wrote:
Slim wrote:
betamale wrote:Hey, a humble guy. I like it.

Can't tell if genuine input or sarcasm, cause this isn't one of the situations where it's both.

Considering he claimed he's the best Jedi roleplayer in all of Garry's Mod and insulted all of the current Jedi characters, you tell me if he's being humble.

I'd rather tell you that your comment is useless.
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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by betamale on Thu Jul 13, 2017 5:40 pm

Eh, doesn't stop me from making it.

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Re: Svadas' Jedi App

Post by Captain Snyder on Thu Jul 13, 2017 5:49 pm

Accepted.

Don't be a cunt to eachother, and don't brag about experience.
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