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Post by TheBloodMaster on Mon Jul 10, 2017 12:37 pm

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Time on server:1-2 hours, likely longer by the time I finish this app

Is this a character application, or transfer: Character app

If transfer, what previous roleplay has occured(Gist of it): No

What items are you requesting?Basic durasteel armor (with mask/helmet), a sith warblade, and a radio/flashlight.

Roleplay experiences?Too many years to count, just look at my gmod screenshots, like Jesus fuck I've been RPing for like 7-8 years now.

Why should you have all this?Because it provides the uttermost basic equipment required for a sith acolyte, and I wish to become a sith acolyte.




[Optional]Backstory:I'd prefer to expand the story after he's accepted, but yeah his name is Klma Hu Alghibbar.

What are your perks/skills?Training in form V Shien/Djem So

What are your faults/flaws?He holds sociopathic tendencies, his slower form and his heavier blade causing him to have a slower swing then individuals with a faster form.

What force abilities do you have?
-Core powers (Force speed, stealth, sight, farseeing, force empathy, telepathy, telekinesis including push/pull, force jump), and force choke

Character traits:Strong, durable, capable (but not exceptionally strong) in the force.

(Optional)Character Description: Same thing as char backstory




Passive RP(Optional):

Combat RP(Optional):




Notes:I'll add more detail to this app if required.

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Re: GO BACK TO BEEEEDDD.

Post by Draxil42 on Mon Jul 10, 2017 9:07 pm

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Post by Savage on Tue Jul 11, 2017 5:53 am

-Support

Looks rushed
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Post by Draxil42 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 6:12 am

Savage wrote:-Support

Looks rushed

I have to agree with Savage, I was a bit confused. There was no real content and/or context to any of it.
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Post by Draxil42 on Tue Jul 11, 2017 6:24 am

Also, not to mention that it seems like you lack knowledge of various tidbits regarding the Star Wars Universe. I can guarantee right now that the four main force powers associated with core abilities are force kinesis(push/pull/lifting), force sense or predetermination, and the ability to perform a simple force jump. This would perhaps begin on the ground, jumping to a roof. Moreover, an acolyte would not know nearly enough to do the majority of the powers you listed, let alone the core abilities. I also remember reading in the requirements and they specify that you must choose either the passive/combat roleplay or the backstory. Also the issue is, unless you write a backstory there would be no way of determining whether or not you qualified to receive a lightsaber before even receiving proper training in the least bit. Anyhow, I've said my part.
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Re: GO BACK TO BEEEEDDD.

Post by Savage on Tue Jul 11, 2017 8:47 am

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Re: GO BACK TO BEEEEDDD.

Post by TheBloodMaster on Tue Jul 11, 2017 10:52 am

I admit I rushed the app, I will make a revised version for review.

Also, considering you have accepted acolytes whom know Form 7 right off the bat, which requires mastery of at least a few forms to even attempt, I believe you may need to do some research of your own, no offense, I mean that statement in the most literal way that you need to improve your research as well.

Anyways, I'll make an actual attempt now.

EDIT: Draxil, I requested a warblade which is something sith acolytes receive before they are given a lightsaber, I did not at all ask for a lightsaber.

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Re: GO BACK TO BEEEEDDD.

Post by Savage on Tue Jul 11, 2017 1:46 pm

TheBloodMaster wrote:I admit I rushed the app, I will make a revised version for review.

Also, considering you have accepted acolytes whom know Form 7 right off the bat, which requires mastery of at least a few forms to even attempt, I believe you may need to do some research of your own, no offense, I mean that statement in the most literal way that you need to improve your research as well.

Anyways, I'll make an actual attempt now.

EDIT: Draxil, I requested a warblade which is something sith acolytes receive before they are given a lightsaber, I did not at all ask for a lightsaber.

I have not accepted them
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